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English Text Errors

Frank J. Dalton (Assasination of Jesse James)

"Several years after the James' case was closed....

This case has never left you alone. After years of searching, you arrive at an old a farm in the middle of nowhere."

It should be "old farm", not "old a farm".
 

SocratesTheBest

Guest
Quarter final(playing against the rules)

Poker Championship
The quarter final. One of your opponents will be Bella. She can play the cards way better than you. This lousy pickpocket, you have to get rid of her.
br/>You forge a plan: every contestant was given private pack of cards. Nobody is trusting each other here. The Queen Carossa is stuffed with shady people.

That br/> looks like a broken bb code.


Should be:

Poker Championship
The quarter final. One of your opponents will be Bella. She can play the cards way better than you. This lousy pickpocket, you have to get rid of her.
You forge a plan: every contestant was given a private pack of cards. Nobody is trusting each other here. The Queen Carossa is stuffed with shady people.
 

SocratesTheBest

Guest
Once upon a time in the west(The game)

But I am a passionate poker player, as you knwo. How about this: we complete what we did not at the steamboat. I do not like to leave open challenges. If you manage to beat me in a poker game the ranch is yours. Get some cards.


and also

Harmonica: Ouch, I am severely shot... Uff...

You know you know me from somewhere do you. My name... it is ....

Harmonica passed out.

Not sure if it is was supposed to have 2 "you know" Maybe it's because the guy is dying and it makes it more dramatically, but I just post it here anyways
 

xDiego

Staff Sergeant
Elite Tester


That is why he planned to get rid of her, too as she showed up.
Should be: That is why he planned to get rid of her too as she showed up. No comma

But know you know his plan and you will foil it.
Should be: know ---> now

Anyways, Calvin is arriving at the train station.
Should be: Anyways ----> Anyway
 

SocratesTheBest

Guest
Ransom Hilda(Unchained)

Hilda is employed as Calvins private home keeper. You start to feign some interest in here because she can speak a lot o f languages fluent. Calvin is happy because you want to buy two salves form him.
 

SocratesTheBest

Guest
I believe that all items of Bass Reeves should be named Bass Reeves' and not Bass Reeves's if I'm not mistaken when a world ends with an "s" it takes an apostrophe without an extra "s" at the end.



Hope that what I meant was clear :lol:
 

Bluep

Guest
Easter Showdown - Popup after selecting an opponent gives the wrong (old) info:
  • You can restart lost duels for free every six hours until you win.
I'm quite sure it's 8 hrs like the normal timers.